http://teacupsandtabbies.wordpress.com/2008/10/30/pastiche-jewett/ A journal about a writer and her three tabby cats Wed, 28 Oct 2009 23:44:10 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://teacupsandtabbies.wordpress.com/2008/10/30/pastiche-jewett/#comment-418 kloh Fri, 28 Nov 2008 19:12:25 +0000 http://teacupsandtabbies.wordpress.com/?p=544#comment-418 My professor congradulated me on this piece. He called the language beautiful and the story "a real story" that is "mature." He did recommend that I change the ending because it is "bittersweet," and perhaps "more bitter than sweet." This is because we all know it won't work out for Andrew in the future--that property is not his and a fence won't save the fort. He recommended a short story that I plan to read and reassess The Tree Fort over the holiday. I also found that everyone agreed--the dialect had to be removed. My professor congradulated me on this piece. He called the language beautiful and the story “a real story” that is “mature.” He did recommend that I change the ending because it is “bittersweet,” and perhaps “more bitter than sweet.” This is because we all know it won’t work out for Andrew in the future–that property is not his and a fence won’t save the fort. He recommended a short story that I plan to read and reassess The Tree Fort over the holiday. I also found that everyone agreed–the dialect had to be removed.

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